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I Live In An Empty City
Contributed by
Phildel
on
Friday, 8th November 2002 @ 10:10:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Waking up to a new day,
Bleak buildings, grim rain,
A day full of gray.
Walking alone, yet again.
Thinking about last year,
Life bustles around
I imagine the laughter
For I hear, not a sound.
I see no people,
But walking replicca shells
Of others I imagine
Who run deeper than wells.
But in a lost timeless space
I seem to hover,
Far from the outcry,
Of family and bother.
Where did they go?
I think sometimes at night.
The people who cared
Brought blue into sight.
I don't know! Can't remember...
It's been too long this way,
I walk on through the long
Dead city of gray.
Copyright ©
Phildel
... [
2002-11-08 22:10:00]
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Re: I Live In An Empty City
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Friday, 8th November 2002 @ 10:23:52 PM AEST
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| nice write, thanks for sharing this one, |
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Re: I Live In An Empty City
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by OreO on
Friday, 8th November 2002 @ 11:16:57 PM AEST
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I enjoyed reading this one
Great write, Thanks for sharing
Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::. |
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Re: I Live In An Empty City
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by Kiz on
Saturday, 9th November 2002 @ 02:17:12 AM AEST
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| Nice one babe x 3.5 on kiz's scale |
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Re: I Live In An Empty City
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by Debz on
Monday, 20th January 2003 @ 09:07:57 PM AEST
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| That's very good! It gave me both a mental image and an emotional one! I'm impressed! :-) |
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