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THe ENd
Contributed by
brown_eyez_
on
Friday, 17th September 2004 @ 05:32:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
hbadday
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Damaged i am,
damaged i will be,
forever broken in
my own misery--
unable to stop myself,
only a downward
spiral i see ahead,
curving around every
black hole and
pulling me closer
and closer...
to my fatal doom.
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... [
2004-09-17 17:32:04] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: THe ENd
(User Rating: 1 ) by emospaztic on
Friday, 17th September 2004 @ 05:33:11 PM AEST (User
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Nice styl.e
-emo. |
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Re: THe ENd
(User Rating: 1 ) by MomentInTime on
Friday, 17th September 2004 @ 06:56:04 PM AEST (User
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Flows well.....
Jordan oxo |
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Re: THe ENd
(User Rating: 1 ) by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Friday, 17th September 2004 @ 07:11:37 PM AEST (User
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i luv it! this is awesome, keep it up! |
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Re: THe ENd
(User Rating: 1 ) by Pyrofungus on
Sunday, 19th September 2004 @ 01:05:09 PM AEST (User
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awesome bro!
please comment on my work too
summer |
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