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~Implicit Pain~
Contributed by
LoelIntrepid
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Friday, 17th September 2004 @ 12:27:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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~Never born from that of grace no tears that so fell without pain and sorrow left in refuge by tha darkest dream you unknowingly did create~
~All hope forgotten yet thought only to be misplaced so yearning for that of a gentle embrace~
~Your heart once filled with tormenting rage forever hidden are tha scares that shall never fade~
~Unforgiving are tha days while your soul senses it has become tamed as this life beheld no plan only to realize you are so damned~
~With no way given to react and by a stilled wind you offer simply a forboding laugh while with clinching hands blood flows through you like that of shattered glass~
~So it has come to be you are now entrapped and holding unto nothing but shame only left alone caught like slaughtered prey as this world sends out its blame~
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Re: ~Implicit Pain~
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by emospaztic on
Friday, 17th September 2004 @ 05:27:25 PM AEST
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This was so whiny, even I couldn't read it all the way through.
-emo. |
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Re: ~Implicit Pain~
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Friday, 17th September 2004 @ 07:34:20 PM AEST
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| dont worry about the other comment, i think this was very heartfelt and shows a lot of talent, keep it up, and keep expressing ur emotions |
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Re: ~Implicit Pain~
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by Loellntrepid on
Friday, 25th November 2005 @ 01:54:45 AM AEST
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| ~For I gave all of who I am and yet you desired for me to become less of a man~ |
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