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In They Did Creep
Contributed by
pixie
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Friday, 17th September 2004 @ 09:15:49 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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In my mind did insecurities creep,
Only tonight did they cause me to weep,
I tried my hardest to not let them win,
But for one small moment I let them back in.
I’ve done so well over the past few days,
Right up until my fears came back into play,
I feel like I have once again failed,
As it was my pain that stepped on my tail.
My strength is already beginning to wilt,
For crying to you I am filled with guilt,
I was foolish to think that I had won my battle,
So insecurities came back to give me a rattle.
Sat here now I feel a weak & silly fool,
Why do my fears have to be so damn cruel?
I wish they’d show mercy & leave me alone,
But inside my mind is where they call home.
My defences went down because I felt good,
Sometimes I wish my heart was made from wood,
Then would no hurt be able to get through,
But never again would I feel your love so true.
It all seems a bit silly to me after I’ve had a think,
Why did I let my worries take me to the brink?
My thoughts should be so far from negative,
As I have a man who loves me & everything to give.
My little relapse won’t keep me down,
I am already picking myself back up off the ground,
I know this fight will be the hardest I’ve had to face,
But I will get to the top will dignity & with grace.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2004-09-17 09:15:49]
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Re: In They Did Creep
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by venkat on
Friday, 17th September 2004 @ 09:24:22 AM AEST
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| well written my dear pixie..:-) venkat |
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Re: In They Did Creep
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by WinterFawn on
Friday, 17th September 2004 @ 09:27:34 AM AEST
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Oh Pixie..my heart breaks for all the struggles you go through...but I love that this has such a positive last stanza....you are very, very good at expressing your emotions.
WinterFawn |
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Re: In They Did Creep
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by Hurretje on
Friday, 17th September 2004 @ 09:41:15 AM AEST
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You give us a clear insight in your sorrowful struggles, Pixie... I hope you'll find a way out... And you are already standing up to them, so you're heading in the right direction!
Hugs,
Hur |
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Re: In They Did Creep
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by a_bear on
Friday, 17th September 2004 @ 10:27:21 AM AEST
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| we all wish our hearts were made of wood don't we..or better yet, stone? Elvis made a song ( ages ago..it's in his movie G.I. blues) and he sings about not being made of wood...I love your poem..it made me cry...someone told me you were quite young and I always thought from your poetry and comments you were much older..your writing shows great maturity..and strength. I admire you Pix..sorry my having the extra accounts troubles you..I'm trying to resolve that...mary. |
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Re: In They Did Creep
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 17th September 2004 @ 11:26:58 AM AEST
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awwww! ((((pixie))))! big hugs hun, tomorrow will be brighter, im here if you need me, more hugs n' love nessa
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Re: In They Did Creep
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by Alovinmann on
Friday, 17th September 2004 @ 01:03:42 PM AEST
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I totally understand been there THANKS
P |
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