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Blackbird's Song
Contributed by
Hurretje
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Friday, 17th September 2004 @ 07:31:37 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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You're love's like a frozen bud
Full of promise, always shut
Shining, sparkling, bright outsides
But within your true self hides
At some point your voice has died
Pouting, never satisfied
You hide your face behind your hands
Indulging in your self-defence
In your eyes, a frozen lake
Impossible for me to break
Through to what you mean to me
Left out for eternity
Winter's over, so please stop
Make way for the first snowdrop
See its white cup, it's stem so green
Pave their ways to what you've been
Open up your heart for me
As spring gets in to set you free
Listening to the blackbird's song
We will dance our whole lives long
Copyright ©
Hurretje
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2004-09-17 07:31:37]
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Re: Blackbird's Song
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by Stitch on
Friday, 17th September 2004 @ 08:08:55 AM AEST
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Such a beautiful combination of melancholy and hope. Gorgeous.
Stitch |
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Re: Blackbird's Song
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 17th September 2004 @ 08:28:46 AM AEST
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Hur, this is so delicately done. Love, hope and dreams are what make life worth living. You did a great job here.
Hugs,
Rita |
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Re: Blackbird's Song
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 17th September 2004 @ 08:31:00 AM AEST
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ohhhh....how sweet! best wishes to you always, hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Blackbird's Song
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by pixie on
Friday, 17th September 2004 @ 08:52:14 AM AEST
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ooohhhhh thats lovely :)
great write Hur
pixie xx |
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Re: Blackbird's Song
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by bernard on
Friday, 17th September 2004 @ 12:30:17 PM AEST
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| Ffabulous Hur II enjoyed this very mmuch bbernard. |
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Re: Blackbird's Song
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by venkat on
Sunday, 19th September 2004 @ 01:08:30 AM AEST
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| nicely wrapped..its very beautiful poem. venkat |
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Re: Blackbird's Song
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by Fionndruinne on
Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 02:03:22 AM AEST
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| Tender and perceptive. This was a welcome read. Excellent! |
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