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The man and the Raven
Contributed by
VampireGirl15
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Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 08:21:05 PM in AEST
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The night was cold, the man was old secrets of a death he told
Whispers in the wind he heard of a mans finale word.
Finely comes the bird.
"He dies, he dies there he lyes" thats the ravens crys
"Live life once more but see it through my eyes" , I looked down at the body and there it lay when to my suprise it turned into a raven and flew away.
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Re: The man and the Raven
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by theMoth on
Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 08:37:13 PM AEST
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A very effective little poem.
I liked this very much, and a raven is
not only a great classic image but also,
as you proved here, one that will be eternally potent.
Very appropriate.
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Re: The man and the Raven
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 08:56:48 PM AEST
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clever and thought provoking.
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Re: The man and the Raven
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by eden on
Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 03:23:47 PM AEST
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I think its really good but that you should lay it out differently. I know this website kind of does it itself but the placing of the words will make it more effective
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