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Thoughts on the Spot
Contributed by
lifefliesby
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Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 07:46:10 PM in AEST
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my love is slipping
for the love of living
hurting
pain
deep down inside
loosing trust of my friends
my family
myself
confusion overwhelms
blinds
allows me not to see
see temtpation
see friends
family
life itself
fear spreads
hurts
yearns for darkness
solitude
emotion
a place to be myself
for the love of my friends
my family
my life
... I miss you all
I miss myself
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Re: Thoughts on the Spot
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by liquidsunshine on
Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 08:05:42 PM AEST
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"Fear spreads
hurts
yearns for darkness
solitude
emotion
a place to be myself"
It's quite odd how closely I've matched that feeling many times since I moved to Menomonie. Sometimes nothing feels right and I find myself saying, "I want to go home." Although, at the time I'm saying this, I'm lying in bed staring at the ceiling.
I hate that you feel so despondant. We'll talk. I love you.
Lots of love and peace be with you,
Chelsea
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Re: Thoughts on the Spot
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by freudianslip48 on
Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 09:53:06 PM AEST
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my son says he yearns to be where he can be himself..
and he shares feelings such as yours. I wish I could reach him. I wish he could be himself around me..I feel the lonliness you write about..it is sad but beautiful |
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