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Let Me Move On
Contributed by
Kie-Kie
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Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 06:00:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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All I can think of
You've invaded my mind
Taken control
Other thoughts left behind
Did you want that to happen?
Honey, I'm begging you, please
Let my heart move on
Help me up off my knees
I want to move on
So you can be happy
So you can love only her
Instead ofbeing, with me, sappy
Don't get me wrong
I love it, it's true
But I want you happy with her
Because I love you
So get out of my mind
Out of my thoughts
So you won't spend your time
With dual loves making you distrought
Copyright ©
Kie-Kie
... [
2004-09-16 18:00:45]
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Re: Let Me Move On
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by afterdark on
Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 06:06:59 PM AEST
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Very very good poem here..I am glad I read it..
Afterdark.. |
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Re: Let Me Move On
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by emystar on
Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 06:18:50 PM AEST
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Very good writing!
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Let Me Move On
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by Solnubis on
Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 09:01:11 PM AEST
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| Well written. |
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Re: Let Me Move On
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by fastpitchqt on
Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 11:44:52 PM AEST
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| nice poem...i liked it! Im kinda in that situation. I want to move on...but not because hes with someone new |
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Re: Let Me Move On
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by Pyrofungus on
Saturday, 25th September 2004 @ 12:21:03 PM AEST
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omg I'm so glad I found this poem...reading this expressed everything that I'm feeling towards my ex! wow...I'm stunned right now...I want him to be happy with her so he'll be happy even though i'll be miserable for awhile, but I will move on...I was moving on even thought I was missing him like hell...then he started calling me again...and all this ***** went down....life sucks and it hurts to know he still likes her!
great poem!
please comment on my work too
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