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Tin Heart
Contributed by
wakegurl77
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Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 04:57:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
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is there a reason
im pulled to his force
i cant give in
to this aquard course
he tries to break through
he cant get inside
i try to break out
i must stay inside my tin
why cant i let others see
the real, true me
my mind spins
with things to say
i just cant get them out
maybe some other day
never had a heart to heart
cant ever find a place to start
so maybe i wont burden you
with my tin heart
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2004-09-16 16:57:15]
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Re: Tin Heart
(User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on
Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 05:16:12 PM AEST
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A sad write but so true for many as I know these thoughts-n-feelings.
Youv'e written well.
luv, huggs, faith,
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Re: Tin Heart
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 07:18:19 PM AEST
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this is beautiful, love your style here:) hugs n' love nessa
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