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When Clouds Collide

Contributed by dreamscape85 on Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 02:41:15 PM in AEST
Topic: NaturePoetry

Looking down from the heavens
To the ground below
Wondering and wishing
That that world you could know
Floating and drifting
Buffeted by the wind
Not having control
Over where you have been
Seeing the world
Through watery eyes
The earth looks like heaven
From the height of the skies
Not seeing your fellows
Not looking at all
You rush into a friend
And down you both fall
Dropping so fast
Turning to water
As the wind rushes past
You hit the ground
And seep right on through
Down to the river
That swiftly carries you
The joy that this brings
You very shortly know
You still have no control
Over where you can go
You look to the heavens
Wanting desperately to fly
As the rays from the sun
Brightly catch your eye
You start to feel faint
And you break all apart
You feel yourself lifted to heaven
The place you love in your heart

Copyright © dreamscape85 ... [ 2004-09-16 14:41:15]
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Re: When Clouds Collide (User Rating: 1 )
by emospaztic on Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 03:36:46 PM AEST
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I like it. Couds colliding seems so tragic. I don't know, maybe I'm just weird.

-emo.

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