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So Special(for my star)
Contributed by
parkman
on
Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 12:55:42 PM in AEST
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So Special
To find someone, as special as you
That makes me feel, the way I do
You lift me up, when I am down
Make me smile, instead of frown
You reassure me, never lie
Comfort me, when I want to cry
Chase away my fears, every thought
A special gift, you have got
I love you so, for who you are
With your special qualities, you're my star
You'll never hurt me, that I know
You are my angel and I love you so
So my darling, to you I'm true
There is no other, could ever replace you
My heart you have, with all of me
Forever my angel, for all eternity
Copyright ©
parkman
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2004-09-16 12:55:42]
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Re: So Special(for my star)
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by pixie on
Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 01:51:50 PM AEST
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so breath takingly beautiful
pixie xx |
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Re: So Special(for my star)
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 02:45:46 PM AEST
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this poem is precious:) hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:- |
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Re: So Special(for my star)
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by starlight4215 on
Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 03:36:33 PM AEST
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| I found my "star" too. You are truely the brightest of them all. Thank you xxx Always and forever ~ Star xxx |
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Re: So Special(for my star)
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by Freda_Burrel on
Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 06:06:24 PM AEST
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| such a beautiful poem ... thank you for sharing it |
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Re: So Special(for my star)
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by freudianslip48 on
Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 10:05:48 PM AEST
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I loved all of it and it's great, but the wording on the very last stanza could use some re-wording..hope you don't take offense. I'm new and don't want to trod where I'm not needed.. just sounds a little too long here and there.
Somebody's lucky though to have such feeling's headed their way ..really lucky. |
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