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Net
Contributed by
luinil
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Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 11:24:55 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Our knotted net binds us all
Tautly with no room to run
Loose enough to ignore your fall
Tight enough to keep out sun
Incapable of severing chains
We bleed and laugh as one
Dragging behind the weak and slain
Herding toward the canyon
One flies out; many blindly follow
The rest left desperate to flee
No sound is heard, screams are hollow
I’ll hold you up if you hold me
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luinil
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2004-09-16 11:24:55]
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Re: Net
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by pixie on
Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 11:26:53 AM AEST
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creative and dark, wonderful flow,
pixie xx |
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Re: Net
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by Sinned on
Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 09:11:39 AM AEST
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Isn't it human nature to run with the crowd ? Is that why Jesus called us sheep ? Interesting and clever write.God job.
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Re: Net
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by midnight_writer on
Thursday, 24th August 2006 @ 10:20:09 AM AEST
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absolutely lovely :)
midnight~amaya |
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