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dew drops and buttercups
Contributed by
Hannah_Heaven
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Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 10:41:44 AM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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the dew drops,
drip drop,
of every petal of a buttercup
lays a tiny tear
a crystal glistening in the early sun shine
soft cheeks rub against
chins shining with petals bright yellow
stroking gently
hands held laying down
creasing the grass slightly
lovers paradise
and the dew drops shine
and the buttercups dance in the wind
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2004-09-16 10:41:44]
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Re: dew drops and buttercups
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by pixie on
Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 10:45:32 AM AEST
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awww that was lovely :)
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Re: dew drops and buttercups
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by Pyrofungus on
Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 01:38:10 PM AEST
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so beautiful! great job!
please comment on my work too
summer |
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Re: dew drops and buttercups
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 07:35:20 PM AEST
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breathtakingly beautiful from title to last line, hannah, hugs n' love nessa
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