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Uninvited Guest
Contributed by
inoc
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Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 08:31:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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It's hot out here I am so high
I need to get away from this sky
I can smell the aroma from indoors
waiting now by one of the front doors
it opens with a wide swing
I burst inside like a crazy thing
darting around the room I try
to find a way to that aroma I fly
hitting the wall, window, and the fluro light
getting dizzy from this awsome flight
finally I find that scent like a magnet
I buzz to it but there's a net on it!
I search for a opening for me to crawl in
not quick enough I'm squashed and buried in the bin!
Copyright ©
inoc
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2004-09-16 08:31:27]
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Re: Uninvited Guest
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by Bruce on
Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 08:40:17 AM AEST
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| what can I say but good luck. nice write |
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Re: Uninvited Guest
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by pixie on
Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 08:42:29 AM AEST
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good write Inoc :)
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Re: Uninvited Guest
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 08:42:38 AM AEST
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Sounds like a few picnics I have been on. This is hilarious. You have a great sense of wit!
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Re: Uninvited Guest
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by Stitch on
Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 09:19:12 AM AEST
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Like an open soda can for a hornet!
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Re: Uninvited Guest
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by WinterFawn on
Saturday, 18th September 2004 @ 07:40:48 AM AEST
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lol..what a creative poem!...thanks for the giggles...awesomely hilarious!
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