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Demure Daydream of Devoted Desire
Contributed by
liquidsunshine
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Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 06:12:30 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I feel demure, submissively sensual.
My eyes feel aglow as radiant coals and their lashes seem compelled to flicker as sweetly fluttering butterfly flames.
Each breath spreads a soothing solitude with an oddly corresponding rush of an urge to be in your arms.
My lips give a soft tickling tingle and they're slick with sumptuous desire and a smile glides over and through them until the expression is physically complete.
There is a kicking beat of something inside my heart that seems wont to escape and attack is almost unnerving and sends a slight chill upon the wings of flitting, birdlike thoughts of what might escape.
Yet all that is left to escape comes of the solace of the random yet rhythmic song of breath and smile which all have come to know as a single, lofty sigh.
With all of this in the air there is also a creation of a buzz of excitement
--No!-- passion; a devotion and desire that is mysteriously derived by only you.
The magic of the mystical mixture of this buzzing passion fills my head, heart, body and mind until I can feel the tiny resonance of the vibrating hum.
All of it, the humming buzz, the sigh, that demure, submissive, sensual radiance mingles in the stillness of the air that is without you and I get goosbumps as I imagine you near.
Yet I quash the rushing impulses as if it would be possible or even fathomable.
Still my eyes are aglow as radiant coals and the lashes are further compelled to flicker like sweet butterfly flames of the campfire you have kindled within my heart.
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Re: Demure Daydream of Devoted Desire
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by bernard on
Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 07:10:26 AM AEST
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| A very sensuous love poem, you have a wonderful way with words, I enjoyed my read very much love from bernard. |
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Re: Demure Daydream of Devoted Desire
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by lifefliesby on
Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 05:15:04 PM AEST
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~smiles~
I love you babe
Jared |
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Re: Demure Daydream of Devoted Desire
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by eatfresh22 on
Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 04:02:21 PM AEST
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I think it may be safe to say that you are in loev. The last stanza was quite poetic and beautiful. Nicely done.
~Carrie~ |
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Re: Demure Daydream of Devoted Desire
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by fielding88 on
Saturday, 26th March 2005 @ 02:13:14 PM AEST
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| very nice, u seem to be very versatile in your writes as i've seen so far. this painted such a beautiful picture in your mind as you went through it things got that much better. i was taken away by it all, your emotions delivered through this piece were overwhelming as they came in a circuit and bursted off the pages (although i am reading a computer screen...lol) this was a splendid piece i could very easily relate to, great stuff. |
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