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Reaching for Summer
Contributed by
lunablue
on
Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 04:10:17 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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It's midnight
and the dock beneath me creaks softly.
The planks are still warm
as the balmy breeze
that blows my bangs over my eyes
as I dial your phone number.
Out here I can see every star,
every pinhole in the darkness,
and every car floating along the bayway.
There is only a blue glow by my ear
and Christmas lights that illuminate the dock.
A single strand stretches across the bay to make a bridge,
as if it was plugged into the other side.
I hear the waves ripple against the bank,
filling the awkward silence.
The sound of your voice
and the lazy lapping of the water
dull my senses into a dreamlike longing.
Lying on my back
looking at the sky,
I wonder if you can see that consellation.
It's our astral connection
over the distance,
our reaching to remember the summer.
Copyright ©
lunablue
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2004-09-16 04:10:17]
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Re: Reaching for Summer
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by emystar on
Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 04:19:08 AM AEST
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A very romatic dreamy masterpeice.
luv, huggs, smiles,
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Re: Reaching for Summer
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by Hurretje on
Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 04:27:10 AM AEST
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Drowsy sweet and gentle remembrance of tender love. I liked reading it.
Greetz,
Hur |
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Re: Reaching for Summer
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by Somnium on
Friday, 12th May 2006 @ 04:24:26 PM AEST
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Beautifully descriptive love story
Ben
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