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I'm Just Sorry
Contributed by
shadowmaster_045
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Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 11:19:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Zac--shadowmaster3231@hotmail.com
if this doesn't work out i'm done with poetry, art, writing, and any other creative or artistic thing i do.
So many mistakes so in such little time there must be something wrong with my mind. Wherever I am wherever I go I’ll always remember you and this you should know. Confusion sets in and the pain begins again, disrupting my life damaging my friends I’ll never like anyone else again. Those three “magic” word’s all never say because as of now I’m putting my feelings away. I still have emotions don’t think that I’m crazy my brain is just hazy. Like a maze I wonder through my mind I’m confused, and for my actions I should not be excused. The only thing I’m left to say is I’m sorry, but I felt there was no other way. I just wanted to send everyone away, but I’m just so sorry I showed my thoughts and feelings in this way. Maybe this is a better way to express these things I’ve felt just like Poe I’ve wrote a poem and placed it on this note.
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Re: I'm Just Sorry
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 11:28:19 PM AEST
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| No clue what is going on with you, BUT I don't think you should give up on creativity. If you look at the people who have created the most valuable beautiful things in our world, they all suffered in some kind of way. I think your rhymes are good, my only suggestion is to make sure you paste line breaks in. We readers are somewhat lazy and it helps with the flow if we can see where the phrase is supposed to end. :-) Please don't give up! |
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Re: I'm Just Sorry
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by AspenGlow on
Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 12:11:05 AM AEST
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I used to say those things.....and wondered about breathing as well.....now I find myself, drawing, writing and of course struggling and fighting for every breath......and saying to the rest of the world, if you don't like me, don't look.
Keep the faith, but in yourself.
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Re: I'm Just Sorry
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by emystar on
Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 12:11:13 AM AEST
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I read and comment on many poems so I can't recall reaidng anything u wrote but that don't mean I haven't.
You've apologized for your mistakes so u can do nuthing more. It's up to the individual person if they forgive or not but if they hold a grudge then they are wrong.
You should keep writing as it's very healing and powerfull! It takes time but I'd hate to think what my life would be now without me picking up the pen to empty my head and find maybe seconds of peace. I tried doing other things in my life but each time something ould stop it dead in its tracks.
Once I realized it was my destiny to write and quit fighting it then peace came a little at a time. If you've written something that angers others then they need to do self analasis 'cause they have the problem. It's our constitutional write to freedom of speach so if others can't deal with what u write then they can change channels or turn offf their putor.
I don't agree with lotssa writings I read but I read them anyway as all my poems haven't been positive-n-happy but if I stoped writing then they'd jus need to bury me 'cause I would really be insane. As long as my mind is busy then I'm happy.
U did a great job with your write here so don't let your mistakes cheat u out of a great productive life jus cause others think it's thier write to judge u.
If u need to rattle then u can pm me here anytime.
luv, huggs, smiles, encouragement, faith, hope, joy, peace,
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Re: I'm Just Sorry
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by MomentInTime on
Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 01:39:45 AM AEST
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I'm curious to learn as to what this "this" is that has to "work out".
Jordan
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Re: I'm Just Sorry
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 08:11:46 AM AEST
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This is an emotionally hearfelt piece of work. I would hate to see you give up your creativity. Mine is such a catharsis for me. Putting it on paper so my eyes can see it too, not just my heart, helps me immensely. As far as mistakes, you're comment is coming from the Queen of Mistakes. I have made some really big ones lately. Not purposely, but just in daily love and life. Don't be so hard on yourself. Smile, things can always get worse, believe me!
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Re: I'm Just Sorry
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by critterhideaway on
Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 04:45:11 PM AEST
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| Whatever this refers to, don't send everyone away, people who care should be able to share, no matter what the problem is |
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