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Dancers Payment
Contributed by
aspenglow
on
Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 10:51:59 PM in AEST
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Vivid pictures, lingering thoughts, dismal dreams,
wandering in my head, wishes of you laying dead.
Funeral pyer, burning black, crimson coals
hells full heat, licking on your naked feet.
Unheard screams in the dark, no one able
to see or hark. Fear not caring, involvement
none, why sweet child the evenings just
begun.
Needle fat, needle small, curved and barbed,
acids ink, Satans tattoo hits its mark. Eye lids
gone, the show moves on, pleasures more
all in store, waiting in the dark.
Split nose to the bone, fashion statement, beauty
mark, reminder to one, reminder to all devil woman,
sins of man they go walking hand in hand.
Smiling, sneering, mocking face, empty sockets of
porcelains dawn, lipless grin, moving on,
pleasures of the night, vengeful mourns
cursing tongue curled upon the heated coal.
Ever quiet, ever still, no more false promises,
vows contained.
Night turns from darkness, dawn draws near,
Satan sleeps but never fear, return to darkness
and sweet fate, as light of day and safety stay
just lost in the setting sun.
Decadant, dilemma, devilish dreams of lust,
screaming as you lie in dust, each night
repeated as your treat, for all you wronged
who kissed your feet.
Dancer who demanded, such sweet and nobel
head, as payment for your dance for the dead.
Copyright ©
aspenglow
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2004-09-15 22:51:59]
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Re: Dancers Payment
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 11:18:06 PM AEST
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Very heart wrenching but written great. U captured subject well.
Great writing!
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Dancers Payment
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by critterhideaway on
Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 06:28:26 AM AEST
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| very interesting write. |
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Re: Dancers Payment
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by oldernotwiser on
Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 09:48:07 AM AEST
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| ahhh. Salome. Some dance, eh? |
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Re: Dancers Payment
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by shelby on
Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 02:41:44 PM AEST
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deep and very vividly painful write
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Re: Dancers Payment
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by PumpkinPie on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 07:42:27 PM AEST
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Excellent piece Aspen ! It's a captivating write, and written originally.Keep em' coming,this was something else-
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