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Eva's Song

Contributed by DarkSoulAngel on Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 10:17:01 PM in AEST
Topic: ThankYouPoems

"Eva’s Song"

I lost you so long ago.
But you had a baby boy.
He left you.
They called you names.
They made you leave.
And what you left is be hind was I.
I was left being to fight on my own.
Find out things on my own….

To learn that my mother is a back stabbing little *****.
To learn that my parents have lied to me all my life.
To be pushed around and not have someone to run too to hide.

I heard them talk bad about you.
I stood up for you and got pushed aside.
I never stopped loving you.
I missed you so much.

Now I’m 16 and have already tried to end my little life.
I see you.

You who have fought to live.
You who had to leave me.
You who where pushed around.
You who was called the names.
You who where left with a baby to rise.
You who is my hero.

They who don’t want me to be like you have spoken to late.

I want to be you.
I want to be your sister.
I want to be in your life.
I want to save you from hell.
I want you to come home.

All I hear is “I need…”.
Well I need is you…
I need you back home.
I need my hero back.
I need to be helped though these years.
I need the girl that use to save me from the dark.
I need my cuz back.
I need you.

You taught me my music.
My life style.
My looks.
My out look on life.
My love for books.

I don’t care if you have a little boy out of wedlock.
I don’t care if you have a problem.
I don’t care if you have to move to Germany.
I don’t care if you have to leave VA and never come back.

All I care about is and worry about is….
Is she ok?
Is she safe?
Does she have food?
Does she have love?
Does she have a home?
Does she need me like I need her?
When will I see her next?

And that is that

Copyright Â© DarkSoulAngel ... [ 2004-09-15 22:17:01]
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Re: Eva's Song (User Rating: 1 )
by teagy03 on Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 10:48:26 PM AEST
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Your poem is great. When life gets in your way, or people do, I also resort to poetry, and base it on me. I love the way you make it personal, like keeping facts about your age, and names in there. I tend to do the same. Please check out Know It All Shrink, and see what I mean.

Love the poem.

Teagy

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