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Night Enchantress
Contributed by
alternachik29
on
Friday, 8th November 2002 @ 01:30:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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The black river of night
washes over my bare body
and I'm swept up in its currents.
And it takes me beyond all the shadows,
And out into the space between the stars.
A cascade of moonlight
shines through the ink
onto my swirling hair,
creating a widespread golden halo.
A smile tickles my lips
As I twirl in delight.
Then a teratoid black cloud
extinguishes the moonlight .
And it makes its move,
And the darkness consumes me.
Copyright ©
alternachik29
... [
2002-11-08 13:30:00]
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Re: Night Enchantress
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by LOWMAN613 on
Friday, 8th November 2002 @ 01:33:22 PM AEST
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| What a very discriptive write! I liked this Christina |
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Re: Night Enchantress
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by Elisabeth on
Friday, 8th November 2002 @ 02:11:15 PM AEST
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Cool poem, I really like it.
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Re: Night Enchantress
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by OreO on
Friday, 8th November 2002 @ 03:13:48 PM AEST
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Wow from one vision
to another in so few words
I enjoyed reading this
Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.
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Re: Night Enchantress
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by alternachik29 on
Monday, 11th November 2002 @ 06:43:40 AM AEST
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| Thanks to all! I'm glad you liked it! Keep reading my other posts. I'd love to hear what you all think! |
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Re: Night Enchantress
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 9th February 2003 @ 04:13:20 PM AEST
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| hey chica! We'll see if you figure out this is me... I haven't gotten around to making my own account yet... I think I've read this one before, but in case I didn't tell you then, this is an awesome poem... lyl, K |
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