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Meaningful Words
Contributed by
Bruce
on
Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 09:51:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Meaningful Words
Three little words that mean so much
are what I have to say
They come from deep within
to brighten up your day
To say them to you now
I don't think it is the time
But not to tell you now
would surely be a crime
I have just had one chance
to know you as you are
Only because the two of us
are so very very far
If the day ever comes
and we are again to meet
I am sure the outcome for both of us
will be very very sweet
I wanted you to know this
and I hope you understand
That even across the oceans
these words flow through the sand
Copyright ©
Bruce
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Re: Meaningful Words
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 09:56:48 PM AEST
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| lovely write. you actually made me feel all mushy inside even though it wasnt for me. thats the 9th wonder of the world people =] |
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Re: Meaningful Words
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 10:19:09 PM AEST
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this is very sweet and so loving, im sure it will touch her heart:) keep 'em comin' hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Meaningful Words
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by Pyrofungus on
Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 10:36:10 PM AEST
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awww, bro this is so beautiful! You did such a great job...made me think of my ex!
please comment on my work too
summer |
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Re: Meaningful Words
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by emystar on
Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 04:06:38 AM AEST
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Wow bruce,
this one rocks!
Luv the last line " these words flow through the sand."
In other words nuthing, not time or place can stop luv.
Awesome masterpeice.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Meaningful Words
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by pixie on
Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 05:39:53 AM AEST
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awwww a delightfully, sweet write, :)
pixie xx |
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Re: Meaningful Words
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by inoc on
Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 07:44:25 AM AEST
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a masterpiece Bruce!
your loving words are so perfect for that someone....
cheers!
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Re: Meaningful Words
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by sweetangeluk on
Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 11:54:39 AM AEST
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If the day ever comes
and we are again to meet
I am sure the outcome for both of us
will be very very sweet
I wanted you to know this
and I hope you understand
That even across the oceans
these words flow through the sand
Such beautiful words for that someone special. So very romantic and loving
Love Sweetangelukxxx |
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Re: Meaningful Words
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by shelby on
Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 02:47:28 PM AEST
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Bruce this is splendid so romantic and beautiful. Thanks for the pure feeling of awe within these words.
Michelle |
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Re: Meaningful Words
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 11:37:19 PM AEST
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Awwww this is lovely......as always....
Sigh.........
Jenni |
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Re: Meaningful Words
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by WinterFawn on
Friday, 17th September 2004 @ 01:54:53 PM AEST
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Very heart warming and hopeful. Expressing emotions that obviously come from your heart. Beautiful poem.
WinterFawn |
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