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Surrender Bound
Contributed by
jaeann
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Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 09:21:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Her body descends into the fiery gates of hell
as her mind stagnates upon neutral
hasn't yet found anyone to ring her bell
and she's well beyond feeling futile.
Her body aches to be possessed
her mind, something too trapped to be free
every one wishes to partake and be quite blessed
but no one has the need to tame all they see.
Her body is left alone for far too long
and her mind is left free to wander
no one's muse or passion, she's been traded for a song
and in her every man puts asunder.
Her body lacks the sustenance to be satiated
while her mind spins on scattered overload
no one's ever so ingratiated
man's bordom never cracked any code.
Her body is bound by chains no one can see
as her mind sears from frustrated pain
no one stays long enough to really set her free
capturing her just long enough for their own gain.
Watch as her body dies from isolation
welcome, for her mind has been there a while
for no one took the time to harness her absolution
but they sure made time to turn down the dial.
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jaeann
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2004-09-15 21:21:00]
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Re: Surrender Bound
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 09:33:14 PM AEST
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Re: Surrender Bound
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 09:37:38 PM AEST
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deeply moving intense write, jaeann, a brilliant piece:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Surrender Bound
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by lovingcritters on
Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 12:27:28 AM AEST
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This triggered many emotions in me Jaymee.......a place you need to be?
A very powerful poem. I'm not sure I really understand the contentation of it all, but I'm sure you do.......
Great DEEP WRITE!
LOVE
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