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i can't make you love me
Contributed by
alyssakoren_03
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Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 06:01:30 PM in AEST
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I can't make you love me
I can't make you see
How special you are
casue your everything to me
I can't make you want me
I can't make you mine
but I can show you light
at your darkest times
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2004-09-15 18:01:30]
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Re: i can't make you love me
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by silent_tears on
Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 06:11:29 PM AEST
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| sounds good for a start. maybe you could just continue with the things you can do for him/her. Just pull it from real liefe, t hat makes the best poetry- something youve been through |
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Re: i can't make you love me
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by tears_of_blood on
Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 07:41:32 PM AEST
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| ya i have to say the same thing just go with what you love so much about him/her and it well come good start |
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Re: i can't make you love me
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by Bruce on
Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 10:36:02 PM AEST
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| great words so far, just continue down the same avenue, he WILL get the message |
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Re: i can't make you love me
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 05:50:40 PM AEST
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very sweet, ...good advive youve gotten, let your heart speak and youll know:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: i can't make you love me
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by Trisha on
Monday, 20th September 2004 @ 11:34:17 AM AEST
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| I liked this the way it is. I can say you could at more to this poem. Just think about what you guys do or what you feel about him or what you do with him or her |
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Re: i can't make you love me
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by Fionndruinne on
Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 01:15:18 AM AEST
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This paints a simple picture, but a good one. I'm not sure you need to add anything. Perhaps just fill what you have out a bit more.
Keep writing! You have a beautiful touch.
Andrew |
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