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Shoals
Contributed by
luinil
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Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 04:25:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I woke this morning from taunting dream
From pictures I fear I’ll never see
Forsaking the moon’s last dying beam
Close my eyes; pray you’ll come back to me
I walked today with a prophet in the wood
Older than trees and wiser than men
He gave me difference of what will and what should
Closed his eyes; rolled off with the river again
I sleep tonight on a cushion of
Demons crawl free from under my bed
Thunder reminds me of the secrets you tell
Close our eyes; stare blind at the path ahead.
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luinil
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2004-09-15 16:25:40]
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Re: Shoals
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 04:39:05 PM AEST
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| i liked it. very good poem. you have talent. keep writing. |
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Re: Shoals
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 04:44:22 PM AEST
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| sure does sound like a weird day =] |
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Re: Shoals
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 05:14:34 PM AEST
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This a remarkably dream and a coinsident that I woke from a demonic dream 'bout my ex but in the dream he could never get anything over on me.
Your style of writing is a very welcome exchange from the norm.
I luv the mysterious way u writ as u ver sully,
silently, drop your thinking when least expected. Very moving!
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Shoals
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by Sinned on
Wednesday, 31st August 2005 @ 09:02:51 AM AEST
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Full om imagetry
very good write
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