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Questions
Contributed by
Kie-Kie
on
Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 04:16:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Why?
Why does my heart poud
At the sound of your name?
Why do I think of you
Every second, everyday?
Why?
How?
How can you be
My world, my everything?
How can I care more
About you than me?
How?
When?
When did I fall
So fast, so hard?
When did I let you
Pull the trump card?
When?
What?
What did you do
To turn my head?
What made me smile
Not sigh in dread?
What?
Who?
Who could've told me
You were so hard to resist?
Who could've kept me
From wanting your kiss?
Who?
Where?
Where was my mind
To remind me of past pain?
Where did you put my tears
The fell like pouring rain?
Where?
Copyright ©
Kie-Kie
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2004-09-15 16:16:03] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Questions
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 04:44:05 PM AEST (User
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wow! really great poem! i was almost left speechless. i know what you mean about all those questions. keep writing! peace n love. bye |
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Re: Questions
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 08:04:25 PM AEST (User
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Wonderful. So full of warmth and happiness.
I like the way you wrote this one.
Well done!
~Breezy |
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Re: Questions
(User Rating: 1 ) by sweetangeluk on
Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 12:09:42 PM AEST (User
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Wow a brilliant write Kie sublime
Can relate to this one from the past
love SweetAngelukxx |
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Re: Questions
(User Rating: 1 ) by O7NeVeS on
Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 02:14:49 PM AEST (User
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Another one of my favorites!! Tanya |
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