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Snow
Contributed by
MLCstar
on
Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 02:15:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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Down, down the snow falls
Hypnotizing the watcher
Its dance light and free
Copyright ©
MLCstar
... [
2004-09-15 14:15:58]
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Re: Snow
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 03:06:55 PM AEST
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This is an awesome haiku..... great imagery!!
Jenni |
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Re: Snow
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by Jolly on
Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 03:10:59 PM AEST
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| I love it. |
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Re: Snow
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by Opinionator on
Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 03:13:20 PM AEST
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| Not a bad Haiku. you described snow so well in few words. not easy. |
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Re: Snow
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 05:15:17 PM AEST
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| awesome! keep writing! |
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Re: Snow
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 05:16:10 PM AEST
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| too bad ive only seen snow like 4 times in my life. grr. great write by the way. |
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