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To you my love
Contributed by
Suggestion
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Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 02:10:05 PM in AEST
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Just believe that I'll be there for you through thick and thin
You would be burning in hell right now, if beauty was such a sin
The word loss has lost its definition because with you all I can do is win
Now that you're here I am finally complete
Our love that we have created together have others at our feet
Ants gather around our bodies because they know that we are just sweet
The feelings and love you give to me is overwhelming
If your love was physical abuse I promise you that right now I would be swelling
But I know that will never happen because love, kisses, and hugs is all that you are sending
To me now, love is no longer a feeling but is now a person
If anything happens, I promise you that your problems will never worsen
My heart is finally unleashed from being hidden all this time behind that purple curtain
My heart has found a home a place where it belongs
Each sentence that you speak and say only sounds like a beautiful love song
Why have you only come to me now, when I have been waiting for you for so long
I've made mistakes with other people, when I wanted to make them with you
But past no longer matters because we have our future together, and thats only true
Our love is real a fantasy were not living in a movie so theres no need to pretend
If my heart breaks I can always rely on you to take your kisses and begin to mend
I have promised you so many times and I will promise again
We will always be together in the beginning
Even at the end.
I love you Crystal. My darling. My love of my life. My bestfriend. My soulmate.
Forever and always together.
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Re: To you my love
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by nail-to-the-head on
Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 02:28:38 PM AEST
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wow! very touching poem. thanks for sharing!
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Re: To you my love
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by Opinionator on
Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 03:09:23 PM AEST
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| It seems to me like you are hiding something. No one can be this sappy and be a serious writter. Your young so let me give you some advice, you probably have not experienced any real pain yet, so untill you do, don't talk about things you do not understand. I am not trying to be mean but I am sick and tired of people writing on topics that they think they understand. |
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Re: To you my love
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 04:31:32 PM AEST
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Just ignore the opinionated a$$ above. Some people just like making others miserable like they are. Your poem was lovely and I am sure your lady will adore it. Just keep writing and never let anyone make you doubt yourself.
Smiles,
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Re: To you my love
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 05:17:48 PM AEST
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wow! great poem. very touching. keep wrting!
peace n love
jenny |
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