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Get a Cat
Contributed by
norticus
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Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 02:02:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
PetPoems
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Little puppy with short brown hair
You make me smile
You made a mess on the floor down there
You make me frown
Little puppy with teeth so white
You make me giggle when you kiss me
Little puppy keep me up all night
It's not my fault you miss me
Little puppy in your little house outside
You look so happy
Little puppy growing so tall and wide
You are a bit of a pain
Little puppy is great with kids call to hear more
You'll be happier on a farm
Little puppy put to sleep and buried by the shore.
"I'll love you forever, I'll do you no harm"
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Re: Get a Cat
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by a_bear on
Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 02:05:20 PM AEST
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| get a cyber pet. |
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Re: Get a Cat
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by Opinionator on
Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 03:01:16 PM AEST
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| what on earth? What has the title got to do with the poem? to be frank this poem is not very good. Keep trying though maybe one day you will get it. |
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Re: Get a Cat
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by Jolly on
Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 03:16:18 PM AEST
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| I get it..don't worry..it was great. Cats are easier than dogs..you don't get as attached. the last reader didn't get it. A dolt in the making. Poor thing. Not to worry LOL. as I said before..a cyber pet...no care at all. Can't bear to see a pet put down, but sometimes it has to be done. We had to have out 18 year old cocker put down..I swore I'd never have another dog...now we have a retriever. She's like part of me. I get the title. |
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Re: Get a Cat
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by tifrob on
Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 12:04:35 AM AEST
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this poem made my heart slump... it is just to sad for words... you don't even need a cyber pet, let alone a cat.
J~ |
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Re: Get a Cat
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by Spazzo on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 04:22:18 PM AEST
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| Very sad. |
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Re: Get a Cat
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by PumpkinPie on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 08:19:38 PM AEST
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The ending was really sad to read and I sincerely hope you didn't have to do this to him.Getting a dog is responsibilty and before buying any kind of animal,you must be willing to give it time,care and love,no matter what may come your way.
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