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You're Really Breaking Me Up Now...!

Contributed by deathdrop on Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 11:52:06 AM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

When I snapped at you before.
You just smiled into my face.
And when I flipped a little more.
You grinned then walked away.

All that tension,
Had been building up.
Just the courage,
To let you know that it’s enough!

… But you played with my irritation,
With you twisted little grin.
Pushed me far beyond frustration.
‘Coz when I was abused, that’s the smile you did…!
I really HATE you!
But I won’t fight back again.
‘Coz I just break every time,
When you’re the one that still wins…

Gusts of tears,
Are now falling down.
I’ve put my hood up,
To hide my frown.

Mum’s backing you up.
Saying it’s a really kind thing you’ve done…
And I’m just breaking down.
Because you’re the one that’s won.

You’ve got me emotionally,
Where it really stings!
And there’s nothing I can do to stop you,
Or the pain you bring.

Unless I was to fight back.
But only to break more at the end of the day.
Because you can really snap me up,
With those inconsiderate words you say…

Copyright Â© deathdrop ... [ 2004-09-15 11:52:06]
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Re: You're Really Breaking Me Up Now...! (User Rating: 1 )
by Overstated on Saturday, 18th September 2004 @ 05:47:14 AM AEST
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I thought the last three stanzas were very well written - well done to you!!!

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