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A Kiss
Contributed by
nail-to-the-head
on
Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 08:26:47 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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Undress me slowley,
Your Kisses so tender,
Blood pulseating around,
A small Blade,
A presice cut near my breast,
The shape of a 'X'
Made to look like a kiss,
Blood seaps out of pale skin,
your tongue licks it up,
Your soft lips seal my kiss,
You begin to suck,
My blood is yours,
No word can descirbe this feeling.
You move away,
You lick your lips and smile,
You lay down next to me,
The pleasure i enjoyed,
Will soon be returned,
And you will be blessed,
With the love of a kiss.
24.07.04
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2004-09-15 08:26:47]
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Re: A Kiss
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by Rhei76 on
Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 10:04:50 AM AEST
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Good poem
essentric
Like turning the knob on the radio
to the right |
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Re: A Kiss
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by sammydid on
Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 03:51:35 PM AEST
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really good. i liked reading this. like *thinks of metaphor like other comment* sailing a boat clear through... through... rough waters? *shakes head at self*
the point is that its really good.
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Re: A Kiss
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 5th March 2005 @ 05:09:52 PM AEST
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| Different from what I'm used to reading. I like it...Nice work. |
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