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Reason to dream
Contributed by
Hurretje
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Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 03:24:35 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Give me a reason to dream
Of golden fields and skies so blue
Give me a reason to dream
Of people so nice and a love so true
When gnarling blunt clouds, like servants of grey
Darken my sight onto you, my dear
When bullying rain harshly washes away
All we once had in a pool of fear
Give me a reason to dream
Of ivory eggs in a velvet spring
Give me a reason to dream
Of genuine love of which we all sing
When all is lost, the lights are all out
And none I can do, but silently scream
Then, in the dark I know without doubt
My reason to beam, my reason to dream
You give me a reason to wake
O, you're fairer than the autumn shade
You give me a reason to wake
O, you're more than any dream can trade
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Re: Reason to dream
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by bernard on
Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 03:27:45 AM AEST
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| Wonderful poem, It is a pleasure to read your work Hur You rhyme so well and your subject matter is always good. Keep smiling now from bernard. |
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Re: Reason to dream
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by all4jesus_teen on
Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 03:38:58 AM AEST
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| This was a really good poem. Great work!:) |
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Re: Reason to dream
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 04:36:36 AM AEST
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| very nice..beautifully done.. venkat |
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Re: Reason to dream
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 04:53:41 AM AEST
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your work is always a pleasure to read.
wildejohnny |
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Re: Reason to dream
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by Kie on
Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 06:14:47 AM AEST
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This is so refreshing to read. It is an excellent poem that deserves high marks.
High quality and professionally written.
Kie :)
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Re: Reason to dream
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by thumper on
Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 07:14:13 AM AEST
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This is much lighter than "From the Dark" series. This put a sigh in my heart and a smile on my face. It left me feeling like a school kid skipping home on the last day of school! :o] Great, great, great.
Thumps ; 0) |
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Re: Reason to dream
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by Tanmaya on
Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 07:52:59 AM AEST
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Lovely poem.
I love the way it flows...
'You give me a reason to wake
O, you're fairer than the autumn shade '
Exquisite and sweet.
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Re: Reason to dream
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 05:39:45 PM AEST
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Sweet poem. Lovely rhyming. I enjoyed
this one muchly. :~)
~Breezy |
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Re: Reason to dream
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by Fionndruinne on
Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 01:32:43 AM AEST
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Beautiful piece! I identify with it much, and have been asking for dreams to brighten life lately myself. I very much like this one. Bravo!
Slàn
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Re: Reason to dream
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 01:13:11 PM AEST
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| I can imagine a sequel with "reason to scream". Seriously though, this is sweet and hopeful. Nice write. Cheers! |
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