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For You
Contributed by
Swe3testLittl3S1n
on
Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 02:18:42 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Here I lay face down on the floor
With nothing but red surrounding my body
Tears streaming from my eyes
Wondering why you put me through this
Well, I won't wonder that any longer
I've put a stop to all the pain
This is going to be my last good bye
My final breathe, my final thought- For you
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Swe3testLittl3S1n
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2004-09-15 02:18:42]
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Re: For You
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by Hurretje on
Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 03:51:42 AM AEST
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Sad, dark, haunting words..strong imagery...
Good work.
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Hur |
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Re: For You
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 04:12:52 AM AEST
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Re: For You
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by Silent_Composer on
Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 05:55:21 AM AEST
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Sadness within each word, sorrow within each drop, you have captured the essence of the subject and put it into a beautifully dark poem awesome write.
~Silence~ |
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