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How I Feel About You
Contributed by
Doriens_Picture
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Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 01:34:06 AM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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When my life gets dark and I am lost without light
I just have to find you and look into your eyes
Your soul inspires me helped by the kindness of your face
Your smile always warms the coldest parts of space
No one can ever blame me for the way I feel
When in the end on one knee I will kneel
I’ll show you all my love in every rhyme
When I ask you to be mine till the ends of time
I will take you as you are in anger, sadness and in laughter
I will need you till the day we die and even after
I don’t want to be without you in my next life
And if I am I wont take anyone else as my love and wife
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Re: How I Feel About You
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 04:12:17 AM AEST
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Awwww is this the one you meant for me? if it is it's very sweet, your writes have great flow
pixie xx |
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Re: How I Feel About You
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by a_bear on
Thursday, 7th October 2004 @ 12:18:07 AM AEST
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| This one had the meter similar to mine...another thing; thanks for saying my poem was the most amazing poem you'd read ever..but that's kind of going over the top don't you think? what about Keats and Blythe and WB Yeats?? REally? Thanks though...lots. |
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