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You hold me tight
Contributed by
fancyface4898
on
Friday, 8th November 2002 @ 07:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I sit all day,
Waiting for the right words to say,
You care about me in every way.
You make me happy,
And that fills my heart with glee.
Having you as a friend,
I know you will be here till the end.
I have hopes that one day you will hold me tight,
Making me feel safe through out the night,
I care about you with all my might,
I need you by my side,
My emotions hit me like the incoming tide.
You have cared so much,
And that has made me long for your touch.
I know that one day soon we will be together,
And our love will last forever.
Written by:
Laura M Whidden
Copyright ©
fancyface4898
... [
2002-11-08 07:30:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: You hold me tight
(User Rating: 1 ) by OreO on
Friday, 8th November 2002 @ 08:48:53 AM AEST (User
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Beautifully written
I enjoyed reading this one
Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.
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Re: You hold me tight
(User Rating: 1 ) by Sexygirl on
Friday, 8th November 2002 @ 09:42:54 AM AEST (User
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A very good write....I hope it works out for you....I wish you all the best of luck!! |
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Re: You hold me tight
(User Rating: 1 ) by Sarah22 on
Saturday, 7th December 2002 @ 10:43:16 PM AEST (User
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a warm hug
from the person
u love is so romanic.
good poem ;*). |
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