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The Last Word
Contributed by
Bruce
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Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 09:44:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Not another word will be written
about the love I had
This will be the last verse I write
and why I feel so sad
I was totally in love
and looked forward to each day
To spend some time with the woman I loved
and hear just what she would say
She told me she loved me
over and over again
How she dreamed of holding me
just tell her where and when
I was totally convinced
she felt the way I did
We made eachother feel
like we were once again a kid
We had so much in common
in almost every possible way
You can just imagine how I felt
on that rude awakening day
So life moves on to another chapter
as The Last Word is said
Impossible to know or tell
just where I will be led
Hopefully, and I pray
that life will be good to me
And many days of happiness
in my future I will see
Copyright ©
Bruce
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2004-09-14 21:44:55]
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Re: The Last Word
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 11:04:11 PM AEST
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Oh that's sad! :-(
The poem expresses it very well though.
Hope things work out for you. |
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Re: The Last Word
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by Brina on
Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 12:29:43 AM AEST
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I know how that feels. o.-
Hopefullly things go better with you than it has for me. |
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Re: The Last Word
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 12:55:15 AM AEST
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awwwwwww Bruce this is so sad Ill send you a long distance hug hopefully that will help
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Re: The Last Word
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by WinterFawn on
Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 04:14:34 AM AEST
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It's hard to see past that pain now.. but time is a wonderful healer. I hope each day gets easier and your future filled with hope and happiness. Very honest and emotional poem.
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Re: The Last Word
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by sweetangeluk on
Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 12:55:49 PM AEST
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The pain will ease in time wont feel like it right now but the mist will begin to clear soon.
So sorry for your heartache it is so very sad.
((((((((((HUGS))))))) to ease a little of the pain
Look after you
Love Sweetangelukxxxxxx |
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