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A Close Moment
Contributed by
Willofree
on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 08:44:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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Lying there I could see
A beatiful sky looking down on me
Bright and blue as could be
I smiled and asked
Is that you Lord
A fluffy white cloud floated by
As a mosaic against the sky
I took the picture in
I smiled and asked again
Is that you Lord
Just then a gentle breeze blew in
I felt His gentle touch against my skin
Within my soul He embraced me
I smiled and asked of He
Is that you Lord
At that moment a church bell chimed
A chill ran up and down my spine
Basked in the warmth of His sunshine
I smiled and shed an awestruck tear
As my Lord divine is here
Copyright ©
Willofree
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2004-09-14 20:44:02]
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Re: A Close Moment
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by poetrygodslove on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 08:58:07 PM AEST
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| Beautiful poem written of his love, It is so good to know his presence, tis so good to know him to, tis so sweet to hear his voice. tis so sweet to read this poem from you..... sandy |
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Re: A Close Moment
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by Nazmythian on
Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 01:12:27 AM AEST
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I like the way you maintained the flow of the poem and mixed up the rhyme pattern here. A very effective, creative write that I did truly enjoy. Amen !!!
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Re: A Close Moment
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by n2dep2care on
Saturday, 15th January 2005 @ 08:44:44 AM AEST
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I had to smile all the way to the end on this piece. I understand the simple soul lifting qualities explained by your poem. Most refreshing and delightful.
Laurie |
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