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death of each days life
Contributed by
serena
on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 08:01:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Tribal atrocity spitten on your face
Pressing corpus firmly against mine
That seal becomes permanent
Choking hazard sabotoging by seperating ourselves,
The content of your memory
Little assurance poured disgrace on my lap
This unobservable claim with no immediate attachment
Reenters with authority
An impending disaster, i know it
And numerous vulnerable expressions, being only partially clothed
Cosmic night suddenly bestrides me
Fearful premonition yet to be convoluted and illfated urgency,
Extensively studying your face, probes no obedience
I who handed you the bloody key to my black hole,
Shall commit not one, two murders
Copyright ©
serena
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2004-09-14 20:01:58]
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Re: death of each days life
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by ShadowDaughter on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 08:10:45 PM AEST
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Ohhhh, I like this . . . had to read it a second time and will probably be reading it again, in a second :). Very well-written and creative, love your style.
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Re: death of each days life
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by Rhei76 on
Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 10:14:19 PM AEST
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| Good write & I too like your still. |
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Re: death of each days life
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by Rhei76 on
Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 10:14:21 PM AEST
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| Good write & I too like your still. |
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