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A Broken Rose and a Withering Heart
Contributed by
Sirena_Degana
on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 07:49:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Picking up the rose,
I prick my finger on a thorn.
It starts to cry,
and blood drops to the floor.
Set on a cold stone.
Weathered in the rain and snow.
Depression drys it out.
The once beautiful red fades to grey.
And the velvety petals grow coarse.
As they fall,
she dies away.
A hurtful memory,
ready to forget.
The screaming cries die today.
I bleed no more.
The rose is broken.
No thorns, no petals.
I set it upon her casket,
as a memory of me.
A last goodbye,
And the fleeting thought,
that I drowned today.
In the blood on the ground,
next to her grave.
Copyright ©
Sirena_Degana
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2004-09-14 19:49:16]
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Re: A Broken Rose and a Withering Heart
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by InnerBeautyQueen on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 07:53:40 PM AEST
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:( sooo sad
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Re: A Broken Rose and a Withering Heart
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by Pyrofungus on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 07:55:06 PM AEST
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Damn! I love it! So sad and so beautiful! "I prick my finger on a thorn.
It starts to cry" awesome lines! "it starts to cry" Man that is great!
thanks for the comment
summer |
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Re: A Broken Rose and a Withering Heart
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by ShadowDaughter on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 08:22:28 PM AEST
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Ohhh . . . some of these lines are absolutely, vividly, ,jawdroppinglyheartwrenchinglyindescribably, amazing. Like pyrofungus, I love the second and third lines of this . . . just, wow. The image there . . . damn. Anyhow, great job!
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Re: A Broken Rose and a Withering Heart
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by sheri on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 08:56:17 PM AEST
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| wonderful imagery skills.....wonderful write too. |
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Re: A Broken Rose and a Withering Heart
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by kidpoet_213 on
Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 11:35:26 AM AEST
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So awesomely sad... sounds like something I would write.. LOL
And yet at the same time beautiful...
Words can't really describe this write...
~Donna~
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