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Eternal Pain & Suffering
Contributed by
Pyrofungus
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Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 07:38:48 PM in AEST
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The gates of evil have opened up for me
A gust of wind knocks me down
Upon the same old ground
That lies below you now
Look down on me as you will
See the anger in my eyes
The hatred that I have for you lurking in my past
See the sadness??
My tears??
They’re from you!
You gave them to me as a gift
So nice of you to share…
Now I’ve fallen
My wings then cut
I was so happy
Without you here
You wrote on me
And told me lies
You spoke as if you cared
But knew nothing as to what it was…
These tears that no longer spill were because of you
These stains that lye beside me…
This hole in my head…
The beauty of a living person…
That speaks and breathes so innocently
Was left with misery
Hatred and couldn’t cry…
It was because of you
I want you to know…
I am now below
No wings
No white gates
Or clouds sit upon
Just eternal pain and suffering
Because of you!
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Pyrofungus
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Re: Eternal Pain & Suffering
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by alyssakoren_03 on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 07:42:12 PM AEST
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| o very good very good.........i think a lot of us feel your pain some deal with it differntly then others hang tight it's not the end of eveyrhting even if it feels like it live for hope of the future......for that should be enough |
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Re: Eternal Pain & Suffering
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by Alina on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 08:15:52 PM AEST
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This has been written by a true poet. Poetically Beautiful.
ALINA |
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Re: Eternal Pain & Suffering
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by Sirena_Degana on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 08:20:19 PM AEST
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this one rocks pyro...i love it!!!! you are a true poet...the is one crazy wicked awesome poem.....keep writing!!!
blessed be
sirena |
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Re: Eternal Pain & Suffering
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 12:26:52 AM AEST
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| very effective description of pain..heart touching write... venkat |
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Re: Eternal Pain & Suffering
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by Stonedraider23 on
Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 02:34:27 PM AEST
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| damn man readin ur stuff puts mine too shame.. good one tho |
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Re: Eternal Pain & Suffering
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by katyqueen35 on
Friday, 17th September 2004 @ 01:02:08 AM AEST
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very touching and deep poem.
very sad .....great write. |
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Re: Eternal Pain & Suffering
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by Solnubis on
Monday, 20th September 2004 @ 04:00:47 PM AEST
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| Very well written could feel the pain and torment. |
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Re: Eternal Pain & Suffering
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by runaway0516 on
Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 01:48:28 AM AEST
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i can really relate to that and im sure others can too. very well done:)
~destiny |
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