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Love's Passage
Contributed by
Merry
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Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 07:35:49 PM in AEST
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If I had known your name was love
I would have answered sooner
Heed the call of passions cry
Swept up in desire’s roar
If I had heard your voice
Seducing me with lips as sweet as wine
I would have fallen under your spell
So very long ago
When all the possibilities were young
Like stars in the heavens, beckoning for more
Truth is, love knows no bounds
Time is but the setting and rising of the sun
If I had known life passed so quickly by
I would not have settled for something less
When love promised so much more
Copyright ©
Merry
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2004-09-14 19:35:49]
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Re: Love's Passage
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 07:43:45 PM AEST
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awww...... if only we could turn back time, aye? gaille, this is so beautifully sad............ hugs n' loves ya sis, nessa
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Re: Love's Passage
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by roisin on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 09:14:23 PM AEST
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| .... when one settles for something less it brings regret in the end...so sad...hugs rosie |
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Re: Love's Passage
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 12:50:00 AM AEST
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so beautiful
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Re: Love's Passage
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by Kie on
Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 10:05:14 AM AEST
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A very wise and well stated poem.
At some point in life I wonder if we all think back and say, "If I had known?"
Your poem got me to thinking and I thought it was wonderful to read.
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Re: Love's Passage
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by Stitch on
Saturday, 18th September 2004 @ 08:45:19 AM AEST
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This is the kind of write I could get lost in the wonder of. Ahhhhh.
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Re: Love's Passage
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 18th September 2004 @ 09:01:14 AM AEST
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i think we can all settle for less at times just to have an easy life.
But i also think if you truly love yourself
( and not in a narcissus way)
and those around you,
you will naturally increase your expectations.
Excellent poetry once again.
wildejohnny.
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Re: Love's Passage
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by Rakerman1999 on
Sunday, 19th September 2004 @ 08:47:47 AM AEST
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BAM!! This one punched me in the mouth. Oh how we look back and wonder what if.....
Excellent, excellent writing from the best free verse writer at this site or any other.
Roses at your feet
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