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Wanting
Contributed by
markey
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Friday, 8th November 2002 @ 06:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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The sound of your heart beating, it’s pounding through your breast,
Your breath is warm upon my skin, I can feel it upon my chest.
Your eyes are saying secret things, that your heart must be feeling,
Deep and meaningful little things, your secrets they’re revealing.
For in your heart, there lies a woman, just longing for some love,
To taken for just who she is, she wants to rise above.
The cloud of doubt that haunts her, that says she is so callous,
There is enough love, right there in her heart, that would make even Romeo jealous.
She wants to be loved, and cared for too, and that is just a plan,
Her heart aches and longs to be touched by a gentle loving man.
I can be just what you want, on any night or day,
I will be there when you need me and help you find the way.
To love you so impeccably, and hold you in my arms,
And love you babe, just the way you want, without any qualms.
So take my hand, and let me guide you, right along the way,
And let me love you all the time, love you without delay.
Markey
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2002-11-08 06:00:00]
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Re: Wanting
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by LOWMAN613 on
Friday, 8th November 2002 @ 06:27:21 AM AEST
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| Very beautiful words I loved this! Christina |
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Re: Wanting
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by Rakerman1999 on
Friday, 8th November 2002 @ 06:28:11 AM AEST
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| NIcely done! very romantic.... :o) |
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Re: Wanting
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 8th November 2002 @ 06:34:19 AM AEST
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*Love is in the air!!*
Enjoyed this... It is really lovely..
Jenni |
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Re: Wanting
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by penman on
Friday, 8th November 2002 @ 07:23:21 AM AEST
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| A wonderful poem of love. Very sensual and full of passion. |
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Re: Wanting
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by OreO on
Friday, 8th November 2002 @ 08:36:29 AM AEST
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Romantic indeed
With a write like this
let us know when the
wedding is ok?
Just kidding but
hope she see's this
it's beautiful
Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.
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Re: Wanting
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 27th April 2003 @ 07:08:37 PM AEST
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| Please all poets remember not all poems have to rhyme. Try diffirent kinds of rhyming. When someone tries to make a poem rhyme just because they feel it has to it really becomes annoying. It is not bad though |
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