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Wonderful Thief
Contributed by
Elysianfields
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Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 05:06:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Inside my heart your tipped toes crept
With flying darts the cupid leapt
So from the start of you i've dreamt
With close guard on you i've kept
My bright eyes starred although I wept
I cried so hard while you slept
For I had scars my soul was cleft
But the broken shards you softly swept
Since been in your arms and never left
My love unbarred and's forever theft
Copyright ©
Elysianfields
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2004-09-14 17:06:05]
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Re: Wonderful Thief
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by Alina on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 05:17:49 PM AEST
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Nice. Smooth, wonderful flow.
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Re: Wonderful Thief
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by Luinil on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 06:13:59 PM AEST
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| beautiful poem* |
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Re: Wonderful Thief
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by Fionndruinne on
Thursday, 30th September 2004 @ 02:53:44 AM AEST
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This is a great romantic piece. Sensitive and emotional, but well-worded. Nice job!
Andrew |
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