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My Only
Contributed by
eyesxcriedxout1989
on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 04:21:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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These tears run through veins
Like a dagger through your heart
Then, I remember your laugh
And it makes all ill thoughts
Of you, go away
Please put me to rest
Bury me
2...4...6 feet under
I don't want this pain anymore
This burden, this hardship
Yet you, my only
Only you can set me free
You could love me
As I love thee
Copyright ©
eyesxcriedxout1989
... [
2004-09-14 16:21:48]
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Re: My Only
(User Rating: 1 )
by poetmarie on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 04:28:15 PM AEST
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| Wow, this is really good - especially for an impromptu write. Very nice. I like it. |
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Re: My Only
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by alyssakoren_03 on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 05:29:33 PM AEST
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| another beautful poem bravo bravo.....again i feel your pain |
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Re: My Only
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by deadreckoning1983 on
Sunday, 19th September 2004 @ 08:48:56 PM AEST
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| mason my young cousin, believe it or not almost all of my poetry is typed as i think it. so for this being an impromptu write, i would say it is very good. keep doin' yo thang, G. |
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