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These Tears
Contributed by
poetmarie
on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 04:10:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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How do I stop these tears from flowing?
This pain from swelling?
Daily reminders of sorrows known;
uncontrolled reactions of a broken heart.
Thoughts sad and morbid;
crying out for comfort;
pleading distraction;
crippling waves of emotion dominate,
can no longer bear.
Moving on, finding peace,
needed release, light and inspiration.
How do I stop these tears from flowing?
Or do I let them come
'till the ocean calms?
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poetmarie
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2004-09-14 16:10:13]
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Re: These Tears
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by Luinil on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 04:14:01 PM AEST
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| very sad... beautiful rhythm |
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Re: These Tears
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by eyesxcriedxout1989 on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 04:26:38 PM AEST
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| This poem is excellent...it flows so beautifully and the wording is really amazing. Great write |
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Re: These Tears
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by Alina on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 04:59:47 PM AEST
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Smooth and Beautiful. Simple. ".......'til the ocean calms." I liked that line. Your troubles will be solved and will fade through out time........just wait and give your problems to GOD. He'll know how to stop your tears.
ALINA |
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Re: These Tears
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by kidpoet_213 on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 06:06:55 PM AEST
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Beautiful write... very free flowing... has a natural ryhthm to it...
~Donna~ |
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Re: These Tears
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by lostinmyself on
Sunday, 19th September 2004 @ 10:55:02 AM AEST
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Wow girl, hit me why don't you?
I think it would have less impact on me than the poem has.
Stunning write, hunni.
But...the best thing to do, is let the tears run free, because it is better in the end.
Great write.
*hugs* Phil xxx |
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