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Guided By The Devils Hand
Contributed by
pixie
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Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 01:07:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I have been guided by the devils hand,
Straight into a place known as no man’s land,
He told me that I was his special girl,
That for me he would destroy the world.
All I had to do was sell to him my pure soul,
He said only then could he make me whole,
Temptation was dangling in front of my face,
He promised that I would be taken to a better place.
With a wink of his eye & a smile from his lips,
Made me want him, made me begin to slip,
I knew deep down that this felt so wrong,
But I couldn’t forget the words to his dark song.
Outside he was pure beauty, inside pure evil,
My mind was already part of his deadly upheaval,
As I looked into his black, vacant eyes,
I could hear so many tortured cries.
Fear crept right up to the top of my spine,
Terror & sheer fright began to tightly entwine,
I knew that from this moment I was trapped,
In the dark lords universe I was more than wrapped.
No longer was any last part of me free anymore,
I was locked away forever behind Lucifer’s door,
I was guided by the devil’s hand,
Now beside him me, his queen for eternity I will stand.
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pixie
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2004-09-14 13:07:09]
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Re: Guided By The Devils Hand
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by blackholesun on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 01:37:31 PM AEST
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| i loved it almost like a fairy tale at the end!keep on writing my deep souled friend! |
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Re: Guided By The Devils Hand
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by Alina on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 02:23:45 PM AEST
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Your poetry neaver ceases to amaze me !! WONDERFUL and TRUELLY TALENTED!!
For me.....the devil you speak of in this poem would be my problems with drugs. I really loved this one. Keep up the good work!!
ALINA |
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Re: Guided By The Devils Hand
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by XxNights_ChildxX on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 02:47:06 PM AEST
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| my lord sweetie, this is one of the best poems ive ever read so far.... its absolutely amazing! aww i love it so much... ur sucha great writer, good job! |
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Re: Guided By The Devils Hand
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by Luinil on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 04:04:06 PM AEST
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| incredible writing pixie! one of my favorites* |
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Re: Guided By The Devils Hand
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by Elysianfields on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 05:44:00 PM AEST
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| Wonderfully written poem! Gotta love a poem that gives me chills. (Will be sleeping with lights on tonight!) lol |
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Re: Guided By The Devils Hand
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by TheRaven on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 08:06:11 PM AEST
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i agree with blackholesun...like a fairy tale, but a very dark one. awesome write, gave me chills.
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Re: Guided By The Devils Hand
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by Hurretje on
Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 04:31:42 AM AEST
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Wow, great write, dark and chilling! And is so relates to my 'From the Dark' series...
Hugs,
Hur |
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Re: Guided By The Devils Hand
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by Bruce on
Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 05:26:30 AM AEST
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| great write pixie, the makings of a potter story, write it and get rich like she did |
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Re: Guided By The Devils Hand
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by Stitch on
Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 10:26:29 AM AEST
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He never does look the way we picture him. He is the most subtle and slipperiest of creatures and his grasp has the vice-lock of a pitbull's jaw. You have described him accurately.
Stitch |
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