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Flying Raven
Contributed by
Sirena_Degana
on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 10:57:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
spiritual
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Flowing through the night,
her hair wraps around her waist,
squeezing her tight.
Flying through frozen enemies.
No one to stop her.
Her goals are set.
She's flown through hazards.
Shes met many depths.
A high set mindset!!!
Steadfast, and determined.
She wills her way,
she completes her mission,
She's found her heart.
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Sirena_Degana
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2004-09-14 10:57:48]
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Re: Flying Raven
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by poetmarie on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 11:50:00 AM AEST
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| I like it. Good imagery. |
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Re: Flying Raven
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by ArdRi79 on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 12:26:46 PM AEST
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| Interestingly put together interesting rhyming structure, generally a good read and all round good write nice one |
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Re: Flying Raven
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by SkaterGirl16 on
Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 05:50:53 PM AEST
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| Very rich in imagery. Great work! |
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Re: Flying Raven
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by dream_protector_bp on
Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 04:21:00 PM AEST
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| i like it. Just something about the way its written reminds me of someone i once knew...sigh* great write! |
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