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Lost At Sea
Contributed by
The_Phantom
on
Friday, 8th November 2002 @ 04:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I am a ship lost at sea,
Land is no where to be seen,
As the waves toss me around,
I long to hear one sound,
A loving voice, a cheerful cry,
A passionate look, those big brown eyes,
Another's heart beat in sink with mine,
A love that will stand the test of time,
The clouds grow dark, the wind begains to howl,
The waves grow taller ,will a love be found,
The rain starts to fall,
A lonely heart releases it's call,
A laugh, a smile,
Even if only a little while,
A hug, a kiss,
Yes you are truely missed,
Give me a sign,
Allow me to see, I don't want to be blind,
I'm just a ship lost at sea,
Is there any one out there for me?
Forever Faithful,
The Phantom
Copyright ©
The_Phantom
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2002-11-08 04:00:00]
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Re: Lost At Sea
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by LOWMAN613 on
Friday, 8th November 2002 @ 05:51:55 AM AEST
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| Very lovely write! i enjoyed this a lot! Christina |
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Re: Lost At Sea
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 8th November 2002 @ 06:38:42 AM AEST
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WoW!!! This is terrific, Phantom... Great imagery.... (needs a bit of spell check tho..)
I enjoyed this immensely...
Jenni |
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Re: Lost At Sea
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by OreO on
Friday, 8th November 2002 @ 08:17:06 AM AEST
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This brought tears to
my eyes, it's a very pretty
poem, and very inspiring
and heartfelt, Thank you
for sharing it. I want to
read more of your writings
Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.
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Re: Lost At Sea
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by The_Phantom on
Friday, 8th November 2002 @ 05:24:36 PM AEST
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Thank you for all of your comments they keep me wanting to write more, thank you again.
The Phantom |
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Re: Lost At Sea
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by PhantomsLDY on
Saturday, 9th November 2002 @ 01:01:01 PM AEST
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| It isn't the spelling that makes this a great poem it is the heart felt emotions that are behind it. It also isn't very nice to correct someone in your comments send them a private message instead. |
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Re: Lost At Sea
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by LostDream on
Wednesday, 13th November 2002 @ 04:01:31 AM AEST
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Simply wonderful...
My compliments,you're a great writer,
this poem sounds "alive",you know...
I really liked it!
Sara |
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Re: Lost At Sea
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 28th December 2002 @ 11:43:40 PM AEST
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Dear Phantom @-<-<<-
Another wonderful write from you.. so enchanting and beautiful..
Your writing friend,
always Nessa
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Re: Lost At Sea
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by car21221 on
Tuesday, 25th October 2005 @ 10:17:30 PM AEST
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| wriiten very good and i like the poem nice job |
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