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On A Rainy…

Contributed by deathdrop on Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 10:37:27 AM in AEST
Topic: happypoetry



There was a fake fire drill,
In the morning of today.
So we had to line up in the freezing cold,
And then, it started to rain…

And let’s not forget I go to an all girl’s school,
Well, basically, they all FREAKED!
Because their hair was getting all wet,
So they ran round pointlessly,
And screamed…

And then their hair got all blown about,
So they thought it, it end of the world!
“O m g!” one girl said,
“Oh, look at my frizzy curls!”

And sure I too went for cover,
But I just couldn’t help but laugh…
‘Coz seeing them all acting the same,
Really did look daft…!

It really was a sight to see!
… Before then they all ran inside,
But I really wish I could put it up on TV.
‘Coz it’s a funny memory they’ll never die!

And then back in the class room,
With their hair all wind swept and messy.
They decided to be in a bad mood,
So they started getting all stressy…

But as I’m writing this,
I’m just giggling through my teeth,
Because it was just so HILARYIUOS!
Because they always go far too O.T.T…!

Just try to picture them,
Standing their looking like little tarts,
Suddenly, with all their make-up smudged,
And flowing in dirty rivers, I just had to laugh…

Imagine their hair and messed up,
And the annoyed look on their faces.
Imagine their cloths all wet and drenched,
… And then me, cheeks red as roses…




Copyright © deathdrop ... [ 2004-09-14 10:37:27]
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Re: On A Rainy… (User Rating: 1 )
by poetmarie on Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 11:57:24 AM AEST
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You're right, this is funny, and ironic. Good imagery.


Re: On A Rainy… (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 12:46:32 PM AEST
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this is soooooooo very comical
Michelle


Re: On A Rainy… (User Rating: 1 )
by kidpoet_213 on Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 01:45:11 PM AEST
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Ohhhh... I can just picture this scene... all those "snooty" preps getting wet!!! Serves them right for taunting all of you that they deem "different"!! LOL! Don't worry I went thru the same thing when I was in school... there is always s group that thinks they're better than everyone else...
This is really a good write... very funny... great imagery!!LOL!
Take care...
~Donna~


Re: On A Rainy… (User Rating: 1 )
by a_bear on Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 02:45:34 PM AEST
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In an earthquake...can you imagine??? Poor twits.. great write!!!




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