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You died
Contributed by
icequeen
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Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 10:14:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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And as I held you as you died,
I felt your life slip slowly by.
It leaked as surely a your blood,
A perfect crimson in so much mud.
Your pain was such that as you lay,
You could not here all I had to say.
Words of my love fell on unhearing ears,
Which I will regret all my years.
How cold you were, where once was warm,
Your flawless face was pale and drawn.
Your eyes were dark as ebony,
With all the hurt and agony.
And I thought that I could not bear,
Your final blank and rigid stare.
And yet I found some comfort in,
The small time of your suffering.
The shock and grief will be so near,
For every day in every year.
I find some peace in that we’ll be together,
For pain cannot last and love is forever.
©2003 Amy Pluess
Copyright ©
icequeen
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2004-09-14 10:14:39]
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Re: You died
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by deathdrop on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 10:48:00 AM AEST
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oh so sad!
my heart goes out to you... |
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Re: You died
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by sober_punk on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 03:44:27 PM AEST
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| very good........very sad..........good write |
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Re: You died
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by AspenGlow on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 07:35:42 PM AEST
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A sweet and beautirul poem, and in that heart was once was warm now lingers in the mist of morn, gently and tenderly waiting for thee.
Thank you for sharing. |
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