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A Lost Love
Contributed by
Bruce
on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 08:31:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I cannot believe this happened
never would I have dreamed
Everything was so wonderful
now nothing as it seemed
Led down the rosey road
where the flowers smelled so sweet
Each and everyday
flowers falling by my feet
I couldn't have been happier
or enjoyed my life so much
Thinking about her each moment
while hungering for her touch
That dream is now over
as she has said goodby
Leaving me in the lerch
each moment wondering why
Sometimes life is very strange
and you never know just when
You can only hope and pray
that you get lucky again
To find someone to love
who means just what they say
Who loves you every minute
of each and averyday
Copyright ©
Bruce
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2004-09-14 08:31:13] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: A Lost Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by jonbalser on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 08:37:35 AM AEST (User
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its very hard to deal with , expecially for a guy, when you lose someone that you truely do love, i know how it feels, and sometimes even words can't explain, just how we feel, good poem
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Re: A Lost Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by shanarah on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 10:03:45 AM AEST (User
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you can feel the hurt, very nice write
Lori
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Re: A Lost Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jolly on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 10:17:46 AM AEST (User
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a mean streak in me wants to say..Good..a man finally gets his!!! but I know the pain only too well..and since I obsess, I feel it over and over and over and over..well, yes, like that. Don't worry..women are like trains..a good one comes along every 30 minutes or so..especially if you can rhyme...:-*) |
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Re: A Lost Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by pixie on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 10:59:18 AM AEST (User
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awwww Bruce a very sad and moving write.
pixie xx |
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Re: A Lost Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by sweetangeluk on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 11:48:28 AM AEST (User
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Aww so very sad. So sorry this has happened you were so much in love. You may both get back together who knows?
A wonderful poem full of sadness
Take care
Be strong
Love SweetAngelukxxxxx |
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Re: A Lost Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 12:08:28 PM AEST (User
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ahhhhhh this is so beautiful yet so sad I hope this is just a beautiful sad poem and not a real life occurance my friend hugsssssssss
Michelle |
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Re: A Lost Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by poetmarie on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 12:15:46 PM AEST (User
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Very sad and heartbreaking. I've been there myself. Lovely write. |
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Re: A Lost Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 03:07:46 PM AEST (User
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Now I know this is fiction....it just has to be... The Prince of Romance can't have lost his princess...... *smile*
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Re: A Lost Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 07:11:22 PM AEST (User
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very sad, very well written.... hugs n' love nessa
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